Developing story and finalizing my film opening idea 

I am now developing the full story and the film opening idea. I have put thought into it and decided that the story will remain the same, it will be about a teenager in Florida that tries to socialize during the summer with people but due to his mental health issues most specifically his battle with depression he struggles to socialize. Then for the opening of the film I want to begin by slowly zooming out of the character showing him sitting along the beach while other people in his age group are horsing around in the background this will be done to show that the character feels lonely in a way afterwards in the same shot the main character will stand up and walk away i hope to cause an effect on the viewer to feel as if he has left his problems for later. Afterwards I want to show signs that he struggles to socialize by making individuals say hi to him, but he is blocking himself. Although it seems like a boring start, I want to capture bright colors to show the happiness around him but give him dark colors to show how he is blocked out through the use of misce en scene. I also have intentions of adding background dialogue and music to add more emotion to the piece. I still need to add more but I hope the idea does follow through its all looking good for now